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Review:Sundowner says:
Hello! Well, you've got a nice beginning here. I like your writing style - you write well, especially dialogue, which is really important. Now, I mean no offense by saying this but the setting for your character is a bit cliche. Her being friends with Lily, Remus and Snape is a bit too much but I don't mind it. Also, her hatred for Sirius and James is a bit overused.

But, there is potential. A potential to be different, so I'd warn you against delving deeply into the cliches. I hope this story has more of a twist to it, something to make it more different than the others.

I quite like it, don't get me wrong. It's just me being a bit of a nitpicking twit. I'll check out the two other chapters ;) Good luck with your writing!

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments; I'd love to hear what you thought of the other two chapters too! :)

I'm flattered that you think I write well; to be honest that chapter is one of my favourites.

I understand that you find it cliche that she's friends with Lily, Remus and Severus but that isn't permanent. That's all I'm saying on the matter ;) And I'll watch the Marauder-bashing, although you could put it down to teenage hormones making her feel extra-annoyed at the two of them...

Thank you for your advice; at the moment I'm not too sure where I'm headed with this story since it's been on hiatus for several months, but any suggestions on future events would be greatly appreciated! :)

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