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Review:soufflegirl99 says:
Man, you handled the emotion with Oliver and Kiwi well - too well - and I don't know who's side i'm on!! I'm angry at both of them!! Oliver for abandoning her, and Kiwi for not telling him in the first place!
Kiwi's mum is awesome, almost as much as me and Cat ;) I think it's really clever about the bucket and the water broken bit, very inventive, and the suspense is nicely built up.
Brilliant use of languages, and fave quote: "I still felt like a piece of shit."
I also liked the rather witty kitchen comment :)
I think it would be easier to tell it from Cat's point of View, because she can add details and perceptions that Kiwi wouldn't admit to herself, minus the gory bits.
I think.hmm, a girl, called Gwenog like from the Harpies!! If not, you can call it Sophie because that is such a cool name :D
I like the bit about the stretch grow presents, that bit was funny and inventive.
Well handled emotion - you weaved anger, sadness, confusion and shock in to this chapter, with a different side to Kiwi we haven't seen before. Awesome :D

Author's Response: You shouldn't be taking sides, the pair of them are idiots.

Nah, you're more awesome than either Cat or Kiwi's mum (though they're pretty awesome too)!

You're awesome &hearts

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