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Review:Wistful says:
...what even, Helen?
another cliffhanger?
You couldn't just smush three chapters together and make an extra-long chapter?
but no. You had to make a cliffie. A cliffie.
As its a good cliffie, I'll forgive you and move on to the other brilliant stuff. For example this fiance. Since when in the world did April have a fiance? This doesn't have anything to do with the two year disappearing act into Egypt, would it? Or is this a new thing?
James. Dom. August. So sad and angsty-ful. Why can't everyone just sit down with stuffed animals and explain there is a lot of family tension but they love each other and that stuff? Then they can live happily ever after. And James... why... that is just so... sad. Making poor August choose after supporting her so long? And Dom, with the rumors... D: I'm not really surprised about that, but I like Dom!

Author's Response: Aha, even if all three chapters had been the one MEGACHAPTER then there'd still be a cliffhanger here? Although I'll admit that I've been super mean with all these cliffhangers so here I am offering an official appology to your nerves. Really, I never meant for things to turn out this way. Sorry, Wisty.

Hmmm... more explanation about said fiance then chapter! And lots of family tension and well... it's alll going to be good fun ;)

(and I still like Dom)

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