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Review:LoopyLemon says:
Hello, this is LoopyLemon with your requested review. As you only requested this chapter, this is the only chapter I have read.

I was intrigued by this chapter. You characterised your characters well. They were all realistic and believable. Though I don't know how old James is, he feels like an angsty teenager who is going through something horrible.

I feel like I can guess what Kaitlin is going to say and it doesn't sound like good news. Poor James. I hope he is ok.

This chapter is quite short and not very much happens in it. I don't think it is boring or uninteresting, but there is not a large amount of content in here that will keep people coming back for more. Your writing is good however and it seems you know your characters well. You could have maybe put James' gait training before Kaitlin came. That way you would have the opportunity for some humour and given the reader a little bit more to read. Though as more of this story gets posted, the shorter chapters become less of an issue.

This chapter was enjoyable and well written. Please keep on writing :D

Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you were interested by this chapter, because that was one of my biggest concerns :) I know it was on the short side, but it felt like the right length at the time. . . . . ah well! I will definitely be adding in some of James' gait training at a later stage! Thank you for such a nice review :)

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