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Review:LoopyLemon says:
This is really good! You had me hooked from the first sentence.

All your characters seem well fleshed out and believable. I really like how you have used actual characters from Harry's year yet this fic is far from being Harry centric. There are not enough stories like this on the forums and I'm really excited to see where you take it.

You did a really good job introducing all the characters and outlining their lives. I feel you portrayed drunk Edie really well. Her story telling was coherent enough to work with the story but her thoughts jumped around enough for her to be realistically drunk.

Your writing is consistently good and there were no mistakes that I picked up on.

This is a fantastic start to a very promising story. I'm excited to see what comes next!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I am so glad you liked. :) I'm ashamed to admit exactly how much of myself was being channeled in to drunk Edie... :/

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