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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Aw, why is this one so short?! I was thinking that it would continue but then you ended it and I was sad and now I'm giving you this review! Hahaha.
So, firstly, it seems that Rowena doesn't really enjoy being around the girls and I agree with Ettie, she had a whole day to be tired. What's with that? Hahaha. She got out of there pretty quickly too!
But I could practically feel the girls' excitement about being away from their own world and going back to the pavilion and seeing Salazar. I wonder what he was doing the whole time? You've got me curious about him! And Dezzy! Loved her thought process on her feelings about him, they were simply lovely. :D
But what is she going to do, falling for him like that? Is there some way for them to be together?! I would be super surprised if you worked that in somehow!
I liked the detail you put into that dance too, it sounds really intricate. I don't think I would have been able to do it! I'd have just fell on my face. :p
But the closeness between Dez and Salazar is really fascinating me. Please continue on with that! :D
I really didn't want them to leave, I was hoping for them to stay a while longer but all good things must end, apparently. :(
Update for this quickly!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hello Gabbie! I am SO SO SO SORRY it took me this long to respond to your amazing review! I've just been really busy, and haven't had any time to get to it! But I'm here now! Haha
This chapter was short, and I debated making it longer, but it just flowed better if I cut it off where I did. And Rowena... she's interesting to write, because I have to gradually introduce her character. The girls don't really know her, and when you're first meeting someone you don't figure out their entire personality in a day, so she is being revealed to them little by little.
Ah, I've got you curious about Salazar??? That's a good thing! He's a mysterious bloke that Salazar Slytherin! And I'm so glad you like Dezzy's thought process! I worked really hard on that passage, because I want to be really specific with words that are associated with him, and how she describes him. As the story goes on, you'll hopefully see that becoming more present in her thoughts and actions dealing with him.
Dez and Salazar's closeness will continue, but we mustn't forget about dear Godric! Heehee. I have plans for Dezzy, so don't worry about a thing... I'm so glad you're enjoying this story! It's really fun for me to write, and I love the mystery of it! Thank you so much for the incredible review!
Cassie :)


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