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Review:CassiePotter says:
Hello Gabbie!
I'm so happy to get back to this story! I love it so much!!! And seeing Blaise acting all pureblood-ish and arrogant was strange, but he played the part well! And, of course you know I loved it when he acted like Astoria was his fiancee and they were eloping! Haha. He's good at making that stuff up on the spot! I thought it was cute when Stori was telling him about her dream guy, and that qualities that Blaise has kept seeping into her thoughts. Which brings me to my next point. Can you please just have them date already! They're so adorable together, and I just love them!
I felt really bad for poor Blaise when he told Astoria about the snake incident. It was so mean of his sister to do that! And Astoria's memory of the client that got buried alive... That gives me the shivers! Ahhh. Are we going to see more of dear Draco soon? And I also had a question for you- what year are they at Hogwarts? Then I'll know when this is happening relative to JKR's story and the rest of the wizarding world.
This chapter was honestly FANTASTIC. I think they get better and better with each chapter! Wonderful, wonderful job! I'm not sure what I'm going to update next... Anything you'd like to request? 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hello!

This was a really fast review! I wasn't expecting this at all to be honest, I thought you'd been busy being awesome elsewhere! Hahaha.
But thanks for always coming back, you've been reading this from the beginning and its been a pleasure and it means so much!
I didn't think anyone even LIKED this story to be honest when I first posted it. It took ages for me to even get one read on it, I was wondering if I should have just started over! D':
Yes, seeing Blaise acting all pureblood-like is very odd but considering that he grew up in that world its all part of his character. He no longer needs it really but while they're on the run, he has to keep up appearances. ;)
Hhaha, I thought I overdid it when he was going on about Astoria being his fiance. It sort of unsettled me because I couldn't help but wonder if he was laughing at them all while he was opening his big fat mouth. Hahahaha.
He is really good at making stuff up, I'd say he were a writer if I didn't know any better. :p
I really liked that scene with Stori and him as well. It was sort of awkward though, her telling him about her dream-guy when she obviously just wants the bloke in front of her. I suppose that was the point? Hahahaha.
HAHAHAH! I can't just have them getting together! I just can't! It would ruin what I have planned for them later, you'll just have to pine and whine about it my dear! And plus, we're not quite sure how Blaise feels about Astoria, are we? He never quite says. >:D
That whole snake incident was pretty hard for me to write because I wasn't sure if it would be all that great. It was delving a bit more into Blaise's character and it was a side of him that I wasn't sure would be conveyed properly. I think I did all right! D':
I did some editing!
Yeah, Sabina Zabini is pretty awful.
But you find that out later.
Mwhahahahaha.
Astoria actually has alot of memories about various clients but that was one that really bothered her. That poor, poor bloke.
Oh, don't worry, you'll be seeing our dearly beloved Draco soon enough. And not at a good time either. >:D I haven't forgotten about him!
And I think I mentioned this but they are in their final year at Hogwarts but I should have been a bit clearer about it. And plus, I don't mention things as often as I should so my fault! HAHAHA.
Thanks so much for liking this chapter!!! I thought I'd made it too long to be honest! D':
I just couldn't stop typing!
Haha, I'd say my chapters get more confusing as I go along but that's just me! You're too sweet and speaking of sweet, update for ASOS!
Much love and OH! Albus will be up so expect that and Abandon in the next few days!
Gabbie


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