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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi there!

This is an original start to a Dramione! I like the idea of Hermione owning a bookstore, it seem to fit very well. I also love the bit you've added with her summer dressed, that she's always wearing them. It gave her character a bit of familiarity.

Your descriptions set an attractive scene. Her bookstore/house seems very nice, the entire town seems pleasant.. very picture perfect.

This also did something good in terms of curiosity. It brought up plenty of questions on why Hermione doesn't remember anything, why Sin (which totally just makes me think of a dark haired woman in a red dress, haha), doesn't question not remembering her own past, why narcissa doesn't recognize her. All those questions help the reader want to figure them out. Though the Narcissa and Draco ones do really push at me, because no matter what she does to her hair it seems odd that they wouldn't realize it's her face.

Anyway, intriguing start, m'dear!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. Alot of the questions are meant to add mystery. Also Hermione has changed more than her hair. :) I hope you come back and read the upcoming chapters. Happy Reading ~ Lady

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