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Review:Ron 4 Hermione says:
Oh, wow! That was amazing, the emotion was so raw and realistic I could almost feel the pain radiating from Draco! And the descriptions were lovely, I could imagine being there with the owl of death at the window, poor Draco. I really wouldn't like to be in his position.

The use of the repetition was really effective and it really made the fact that he was almost being haunted that bit more creepy. Chilling.

I noticed a few little spelling mistakes, but nothing major and nothing that took away from the piece as a whole- "I get myself a peice of cake" Peice should be piece and "with the ammount of cake" ammount should be amount.

As for your question weather or not you should do a squeal I think it is entirely up to you. This doesn't leave us hanging so there is no pressing urgency for one but if you wrote another and managed to achieve the same chilling effect, it really would be be something. And you would have to tell me :P
Awesome Job! :D

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