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Review:BKL8008 says:
Once again, you do a good job of setting up the personalities more and more of the boys who will eventually become The Three Brothers in the Beedle the Bard tale.
Antioch, the pushy 'wannabe' powerful one.
Cadmus, the quite and more emotional one.
And Ignotus, the one who would rather be left alone and hide, perhaps under a Cloak...
The interpersonal relations are well done here, and the little gentlemen of this Era are still "real boys" in that they are flawed - as all children are. By this I mean that they lack experience in life, as all children do. You have not depicted them as superheroes, and that's good. It makes for a more believable read, with the "MOM!" and the "I'm gonna tell!" mindset.
You must have children or little brothers?! ;)

Author's Response: Hello again! It's really nice to see you here and thank you for your generous compliments.

I'm always enthralled to hear that the brothers are developing in the right direction. Though characterisation isn't usually my forte, I think this story is giving me a massive chance to improve.

I also am very relieved to hear that they seem to be children. When I got feedback on the first chapter, I was told that the boys seemed to be really mature and I tried to change that. I'm glad that this is how they're coming off now. But yes, I do have little brothers and cousins around the age of the Peverell boys! :)

Once again, thank you for the lovely review! Such encouragement always makes me want to write more and strive to improve.


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