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Review:firefly910 says:
You know what? Beth and Sev are so darn cute together. The little things they notice about each other make me want to squish their cheeks. And the way Sev reacted to her hug was adorable! Bless him.

And they would be perfect for each other IF THERE WASN'T A WAR GOING ON AND THEY WERE ON OPPOSING SIDES!

You have this knack of making me gush in the cuteness of blossoming love and then BAM you shove a Death Eater in my face and remind me that what they are doing is so dangerous!

Like what if Roark decides to find out who the girl he saw was? I mean he could just toss that aside because he's not going to be the sentimental kind of guy is he. But if, for one moment, he thinks that whoever the girl he saw was is going to pose a threat then, well, they could both be in huge amounts of trouble.

What will come of them?!?! Gah, I need to know!!

I am just so curious as to what Sirius is going to do when he finds out about them as well. Beth can't go on hiding it forever. Oh he is going to crushed and then probably majorly angry!

This story just gets better and better Jane!

Author's Response: AREN'T THEY THE CUTEST. I've got major bias in that respect, I guess, but they're just so awkward and adorable and it kind of gives me a warm feeling in the pit of my stomach every time I think about it. Which basically signifies that I'm too attached to this story, I think. I don't even know what I'm going to do with myself once these books are finished. Stupid war. Stupid, stupid, stupid.

I'm actually really glad you get lulled into a false sense of security, as it were, because in a way Beth's doing the same. It's all very well and good to pretend she's pursuing this somewhat awkward relationship... but the truth of the matter is that Severus is her enemy, and she is his. Both of them are in such serious danger, and if they forget that, even for an instant, everything might very well go up in smoke.

I know you've reached that chapter by now, but man, Sirius's reaction to Beth's secret. Oh, boy. :P I'm so, so pleased you're enjoying the story thus far, Callie! ♥ Thank you for reviewing this chapter for me!

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