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Review:GirlOnTheSidelines says:
So hello there,

I'm leaving you a nice bunch of reviews to get back to aren't I? Words cannot express how awesome this story is. It is so unique and I just love how feisty Audrey is.

That Remmington guy is a nasty piece of work and I hope Audrey gets a chance to punch him in the face rather than the gut at some point.

Loved the way she opened the door to Percy, he must have been thoroughly amused. And her sniffing him... that was hysterical. I really like how Audrey is a muggle, it's fascinating seeing Percy through her eyes when we know why he is so 'weird'. Also, the compliments he gives her are so adorable and I actually laughed when she giggled. And then threatened him.

I also like how you keep giving us snippets about her parents, it gives more depth to her character. And it's really sad, especially how her father seemed to destroy her mother.

And he took her to the theatre. I found that so touching because that's what she wants to do with her life (I can't remember if he knows that or not but either way, I thought it was really sweet).The bit where he didn't know who Shakespeare was and the couple behind them gawped was pretty funny. Audrey needs to educate him.

It's sad how adamant he is that he is not good for her. Even though she wants him so badly. I hope they realise how perfect for each other they are soon. I can't wait! Please update more. Soon.

GirlOnTheSidelines x

P.S. You are truly amazing.

Author's Response: Hello!

Why, this is so nice, coming back to finding so many lovely reviews! I really wasn't expecting anything to be honest but its so nice to hear from you again!
Anyway, thanks so much for liking the way I've got this story, its actually become very easy for me to write so far. I think I have more of a feel for what I want to do with it and the characters are so challenging! I love Audrey and Percy together, they make me really delve into my skills a bit more.
Yeah, that Remmington guy is really nasty isn't he? I mean, seriously. And he's messing with the wrong piece of work, though. Audrey's no cowering little miss and he'll realize that soon enough if I have my way. >:D
Yes! Percy was pretty amused by the sight of Ms. Tang looking so uhm, out of place. I'm pretty sure he was laughing rather hard inside of his head and she didn't enjoy that very much!
Its incredibly fun writing from Audrey's POV because honestly, what is she to think? He wears robes, doesn't know about TV's and such and is just plain odd. But we know the truth don't we? ;)
Percy is a sweetie underneath it all I think and her giggling was just an added bonus! I think I laughed while writing that scene as well. Hehehe. They're so cute!
I think I wanted to give a bit more about Audrey's background in this chapter because Percy hasn't hinted anything about his. I thought it might give you a sense of why she is the way she is. Her parent's relationship was really sad, which is why she doesn't have hope for ever finding someone good for herself. :(
Yeah, Percy took her to see a play because he's such a sweetheart! I totally blushed as I wrote that because it was really nice of him even though he didn't seem to understand the importance of plays, Shakespeare or anything else really. :D
Audrey will educate Mr. Weasley with alot of things. >:D
Percy will go into more detail on why he feels the way he does about their weird relationship and its going to be an eye-opener I think. :D
You're much more amazing! >_<
Much love,
Gabbie


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