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Review:firefly910 says:
Am I the only one that could see Sirius and Beth having their own TV show with them solving crimes and stuff? We'll ignore the fact that Wizards don't have TVs of course.

Brilliant chapter!

Lucius was perfect, still the same arrogant person. I always wonder what he was like when Voldemort first started gaining momentum. I can imagine he had all this grandeur about him, strutting around like the Peacocks he has at his manor. (I really do blame him for how Draco turned out!)

Loved the mission. You got the tension and suspense perfectly.

The bit where you had Beth realise that Sirius could be serious (haha) serves as a point to everyone that when needed he can be relied upon. . . until he decides to blow something up. I did giggle a little bit at the thought of a random wand hovering in mid-air as well.

Caradoc - I suppose like Sarah said in her review, we should feel sorry for him. But, alas, I can't because he sounds like the type of person that asks for those kind of things to happen to him because of his attitude. By the sounds of it he needs to keep his mouth shut about The Order a little bit more.

I'm intrigued to know what Malfoy wants with Borgin/Burke and what information he is passing on. This mission kind of ignites the plot a little bit. A sort of hint that things may start to move very quickly, quite soon.

Author's Response: I would totally write for a show like that, if it existed! You're not the only one, though -- Sarah, at least, mentioned something about them being a good cop/bad cop duo. I'd write for a show like that too!

I loved writing this mission chapter, and I'm so, so happy to have your comments about the tension and suspense and all of that. ♥ Let's be real -- Lucius Malfoy had a bit of strut about him even after Voldemort fell for the first time, didn't he?

See! I meant what I said about Sirius being serious (pun)! Oh, your reviews are just too much. I cannot do them justice, and I must apologize heartily for it. I really do tend to ramble in review response to you! Thank you as always, love. ♥ It honestly means so, so much to me!

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