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Review:firefly910 says:
PETER YOU BAD BAD PERSON! YOU WENT ALL WEIRD BECAUSE YOU ARE A SPY AND VERY BAD THINGS ARE GOING TO HAPPEN BECAUSE OF YOU!

Oh I cannot wait for you to write that bit. But urgh he just makes me so ANGRY!


Now I still don't know how I feel about Beth and Sev. But I do love the way you write them. I can just picture him being so out of place in muggle clothing and staring at his mark wishing it wasn't there. BUT THAT'S THE DECISION HE MADE!

Oh I just don't know what's going to come of them both. They really can't fall in love because how is it going to work?

“And all I want is - is to be independent of it, have us without this… war.”

^ Loved that line! But really can they do that? Is it even possible?

Argh, Jane you've created such a good story line!! A part of me really wants Sneth to work out! But the other part of me knows that it can't!

Author's Response: Hee! Writing Peter in a sympathetic light, up to this point, was a bit of a struggle -- but now I can finally write him all shady and rat-like. ;) I suppose you're farther than this chapter now, but I do hope you enjoyed the chapter a bit further down the line from Peter's perspective, despite the fact that... well, he's easy to hate!

I completely understand a bit of hesitance still about Beth and Severus and their relationship, and it's very normal, I think. After all, readers don't quite know exactly what's going to happen, like I do. :P And some people just don't like Severus! But I adore writing them, and I already know I'm going to miss it so, so much, when all the books are said and done with.

I do think I can tell you not to give up on their relationship just yet... Life has a funny way of working things out, even in fiction. Don't give up on the possibility yet! And, yet again, thank you so much for taking the time to leave me this review -- it really does mean so much to me that you're enjoying it thus far! ♥


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