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Review:BKL8008 says:
And the whole bit about genetics was just getting good, too! Damn cliffhangers.
And the kid drawing up incomprehensible charts? Do I detect a jab there? ;)
I liked how you've brought them all together, too, and that their detention wasn't overly hideous! Looks like the "Magic" van has struck again, huh?
Great bit with the ending as well, what Greg walked into. Well done.

Author's Response: I can't pretend those JPGs weren't going through my mind when I wrote that bit... that part of the chapter had been written for weeks, originally in Ch14, but other things needed to happen.

I think I need to run the genetic story on for a few chapters here, to give those readers who haven't got Punnet Squares on the brain a bit of a chance to get to grips with the ideas. More in the next chapter, heading for the queue now...

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