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Review:Leslie says:
Ok so... Maybe it wasn't actually Draco in the last chapter? Hmm. I'm interested to see what happens with that. I'm really kinda confused... There was so much darkness and different people moving around and Harry lying, I just don't know!

This chapter wasn't quite as eventful, but that's probably a good thing after the last one! Haha but I still loved it, of course. I'm not sure what to make of this Harry situation, so I'll just have to wait and see, I guess! Still super excited to find out where it goes from here! :D Wonderful job, as always!! And sorry again that I slacked on reviewing! I looked at my last review and saw that you said that you couldn't wait to see what I thought about the next chapter, and then I made you wait! :( lol I'll be better next time!!

Author's Response: No, it wasn't. But you have to have some filler chapters that take your heart rate down a bit. To be completely random, I go to Zumba dance classes (hope you know what those are) and the idea is to keep your heart rate all over the place to get a better workout. I like to think of a solid story as that: a dance with lots of different beats that slow you down and speed you up. If you don't have some "calming" chapters, then I think the story sort of becomes unrealistic. Our lives aren't adrenaline filled every moment, but that's what makes us human. I wanted my characters to be as human as possible, so I wrote some chapters that examined them sort of just existing. But I agree, not very eventful. More than anything, I just wanted to smooth the bridge between McGonagall and Ashley since she's her favorite teacher and to tie up the altercation with Pansy a few chapters back.

Don't worry about it! We all have lives, other things going on (other awesome stories to read!), so I completely understand. Glad to hear from you again though! As always, I appreciate your reviews immensely, and anxiously await your next thoughts.

By the way, which story were you reading. It must be good, since obviously you have good taste ;)


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