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Review:Leslie says:
So first I just want to say I'm SO SORRY I haven't reviewed this sooner! I read/reviewed the other chapters like right away, I feel bad that I'm behind now and there are two whole chapters I haven't reviewed! Last week was pretty busy, and I'll be honest, I got sucked into another story that was completed while I was waiting for your next chapter, and then once I started I just had to finish that one! Haha

Anyway, to the point: OMG WHAT WAS THAT?!?!?!? HARRY. UGh. I wanted to slap him. That was HORRIBLE. I'm kinda confused in general what exactly happened, but I think that's just because Ashley was confused too. Omg Harry... I thought you were ok. Then you had to go and do that?! What a jerk!!

I mean I know he was trying to help her and thought he was doing the right thing, I guess. But still! That was so horribly wrong!!

And I've gotta say, I thought Ashley would know whose voice it was that was talking to her. I mean I get that it was dark and she didn't think anyone else was with her besides Harry. Personally I've never been in that situation before, but I would think I'd recognize the voice of the guy I'm in love with! haha but maybe not, since it was completely out of the blue.

Fantastic job!!! That really shocked me, so good job there! :D

Author's Response: Okay, I'm not gonna lie, I was beginning to freak out because I hadn't heard from you in a couple days (not to be selfish), but I was thinking, "Is she ok? Usually I hear from her by now...". I don't blame you, when you find a good story, there's this obsession with finishing it, so I understand.

You know, I wasn't really sure what happened either. When I was posting this, I was like, "This is probably a really random and stupid chapter because, well, its just random." But I get so stuck in my ways, because this story has been complete for over six months, and I didn't want to change it because I didn't know how, to be honest. Random? Yes. Will it really have a huge effect come the next few chapters? Not really. But...it is what it is I suppose.

Yahhh, that's actually a good point. I would hope you'd recognize your boyfriend's voice. Hmmm, maybe I should've had some of these chapters beta read? Haha, a novice writer's mistake.

Thank you! So good to finally hear from you again! On to your next review :)

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