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Review:zipzin says:
Loving this story so far and I can't really believe that you are going to write it all in one story. Props to you. I can't wait to see how you will handle key moments in their life like realizing Remus is a werewolf, the Animagus process, James realizing he likes Lily, etc.
I think you have been handling each character properly so far. Their stories make sense and I think that James is the clueless guy who can be so blunt it's painful is perfect. I think he should have been Chaser but you know that girl can always get injured. (Like fatally. I mean out for the season, nothing life defining)
The only major okay not major but in James point of view you mention the Prewett twins as the Weasley twins so you might want to do a quick edit on that.

Author's Response: Haha, neither can I, to be honest. There are big plans and plots in future chapters, hopefully you'll enjoy them as much as I love planning them! There's a reason Peter has become one of my favourite Maruaders ;)

Oh, that's brilliant. I'm glad you think so! As for the Chaser... this story will be 100% (or as close as I can get) canon. But that's all I'm saying. :P

Ah! Oops! Thank you for pointing that out - I'll fix it as soon as I get a spare moment! :)

Thank you for reading and reviewing! It means a lot to know that you're enjoying the story! Keira :)

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