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Review:caomoyl says:
Hey! This was a really great entry in my challenge! I loved it and the way you incorporated the meme quote into the story, it really worked well.
I adore the way you portrayed Amycus! I have never really thought of his character very much as we never really see much of him, but this really brought out his twisted side that we assume from the little we do see. You made me pity those in the class more than I already did and also showed a Slytherin as a nice person who didn't agree with everything that was happening. That isn't done often and it made a nice change to see it more realistically.
The way you wrote Neville was so well done. You didn't show him as the shy and reclusive boy we used to know, but more as they brave boy who stood up for what he believes in. Some people do forget that on occasion.
This had a really nice flow and it all seemed to go at a very good pace that didn't overload you with information whilst not boring you! I didn't find any mistakes in it at all which was nice, so well done on that!
Overall, I really loved this story! Sorry for taking so long with the review! RL kind of sucked a lot for a while and got really busy, but keep an eye on the blogs on the forums and I'll announce the results as soon as I can!!

-caomoyl

Author's Response: Hello!

I loved this challenge, I had SO much fun writing it! :D

I thought of Amycus because I felt the character needed to teach someone else on this, so the only two evil people I could think of was Amycus and Alecto. :p

I've always seen Theodore Nott as a kind of nice person. And I know all Slytherin's aren't mean and evil, so I felt I should try and chuck that in there. :p

Neville is boss, so he couldn't just be shy. And he got so many bruises because he stood up to Amycus/Alecto so I knew in DH he wasn't a shy, bumbling boy any more.

Wow, no mistakes?! That's gotta be a first! ;D

It's okay about the review, I understand that RL can be frustrating! I'm excited for these results!

Thanks for creating this challenge and thank you for the review! :D


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