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Review:shadowycorner says:
When I started reading I thought this was a one-shot for some reason and as the story was progressing, I was actually sad by that fact because Helen intrigued me a lot. And yay, it will have the next chapter. I am favoriting it, simply because of Helen. You've poured out some very good characterisation here. Her arrogance just breathes off the page. And for some reason, I still find her sympathetic. Maybe it's because she's aware of her being a not such a nice person, therefore is honest with herself. I have gone through times in my life when I acted and felt similar to Helen. Not to such an extent, but I think I can guess where she's coming from...? What I'm trying to say is that it doesn't happen often a character negative and angsty as this grabs my attention so much. 10 points for the. The writing kept me on my toes the entire time (I was waiting for Remus to appear), and overall I really liked this and WILL be reading more. Let me know when you update on the forums if you'd like. :)

Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for your review. I'm considering rewriting this chapter and including one of the Marauders, possibly Remus, just to get some dialogue in there. And I will most certainly tell you when I update!

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