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Review:CassiePotter says:
Hello! I'm here from the Hufflepuff review tag!
I thought this story was really good, especially because we were reading about Bellatrix, and you aren't dreading her death because of how awful she was. I think you did a good job capturing her feelings about Harry, Ginny, Hermione, and Mrs. Weasley, and also her faithfulness to Voldemort. There were a few grammar things I noticed that could easily be fixed.
"They were all fighting there hardest" should be "their hardest"
"Suddenly it wasn't the Potter boy running towards her but a women" should be "a woman"
Other than that, the pace and flow of the story was very good and I really enjoyed it. 9/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hey, sorry for the wait real life has been hectic!
I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the tips, I'll edit it when I get the chance! :)
Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you liked it! :)

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