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Review:Jchrissy says:
Oh my gosh the characters in this made me so angry! I hate that Dom would let the relationship start in the first place, I couldn't image my sister doing that to me or doing that to my sister. But she's also young and in love. Teddy, honestly I had no sympathy for him in this. Not that you didn't write it well, because you did a great job at working his emotions, I just think someone who can do that to not only two different women, but two sister, is terrible. He's destroyed Dom, and simply because *he* can't stand to be without her. He never thought of what this secret relationship would do to her heart, her emotions.

And even the fact that he thinks he has a chance at a happily married life with Victoire is insane, because he's already proved that he's not strong enough to resist someone else. Even if he does love that someone else. Having to end an affair so you can start a marriage just should never happen, and I want to ask him if he's crazy thinking that he has any chance at really finding happiness.

Most of all, I feel terrible for Victoire in this :(. I feel sad for Dom too, but she knew what she was doing. Vic has no idea any of this is happening to her. Regardless if she's a spoiled brat who throws fits, that doesn't give Teddy the right to treat her like this. She's just living in a dream world where the two people she loves most are betraying her and that made my heart break for her :(.

I loved how complicated you made all the things going on. This one shot kept me entertained and committed to finding out what happened the whole way!

Great writing :)!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing. I am glad my story got such a strong reaction out of you, haha. I completely agree with you on everything, I have had a guy like Teddy in my life before, so I know he doesn't deserve sympathy lol. But he's a confused bloke so oh well. I definitely felt sad for the two girls when I finished writing this too. It is quite a heartbreaking situation eh.

I am happy you liked my fic overall though, thanks!

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