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Review:shadowycorner says:
I actually think this could easily be canon. Narcissa was always a devoted mother and perhaps Lucius knew how to produce a Patronus. Besides, his patronus being a peacock is so fitting.

I liked how you balanced out action with Narcissa's train of throughts. It kept me reading this all at once without being distracted. And I like reading about the stories that might've happened but we were never told. This was an interesting and creative blank to fill in. We could really see Narcissa's love for her son and her mother's instict working hard to protect him. I also liked the irony towards the end, where Narcissa hopes Draco will be now safe from the darkness, while we know that he won't because of his involvement in the 'let's kill Dumbledore plot'.

Great job. It was a nice read. :)

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am flattered that you think this could be canon.

I am glad you liked reading this. Thanks a lot!

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