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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hello again! :D

This was another amazing chapter, however there were a few mistakes but I think it can just be cleared up if you read the story aloud.

Also, I was confused when Hagrid was leading the Avengers to Hogwarts. But this might be because my cousins were attacking me and my attention wasn't really focused. :p

And I saw your last response, that you felt it was still er... I can't exactly remember what you said, but I think you were a bit worried about the whole thing. If you want you can join the forums and ask for a Beta, I would love to do it but I've got far too much on my plate. :( They're really helpful! :D and we could be forums buddies! :D

So this was another amazing chapter, I loved it! I loved the food fight! James and Sirius were hilarious.

Is Ajax an English name? Because over here in Australia it's a type of cleaner thingy. :p It made me giggle. :p

So this was another amazing chapter! I can't wait to read more! :D

10/10!

Author's Response: Oh hello there! :D

And yes, typos! I tried to fix it up once when editing the first five (?) Chapters, but Microsoft Word doesn't catch everything that I don't catch, so I'm going to have to undergo edits...again.

And about you being confused about the Hagrid scene, I'll go back and look over it. I may just have to re-edit it or something, but I'll get to fixing everything up once time slackens. Your cousins sound so sweet though. :)

And I would love a Beta, however, I tried joining the forums before, but as I was signing up it said my email was invalid. I tried refreshing the page and closing my browser, but it kept saying the same thing. Hence why I don't have a MTA's page yet. I don't really like creating a new email either, because then I lose track of it, and as of right now I have a total of four different emails due to lost passwords and I can't remember my security questions. But other than that, I would LOVE to join the forums.

And I'm glad you like the food fight. It was my favorite part when wri...er, typing this chapter. :)

And Ajax. Honestly, I was thinking of something "different", seeing the series had some uncommon names. Ajax is actually a Trojan Warrior in mythology, killing 28 people and eventuallykilled by Paris and Apollo, but that's not really important, just a bit of background. So yeah, Ajax was a pretty strong and tough dude, wich I thought, explained the Woods pretty well, so Ajax it was! But yeah, I can see the comedy of it. Ajax is a type of cleaner here in the states as well. :)

Hopefully the story doesn't loose it's touch, and I'm eager to what you say on your next review :)

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