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Review:leaky_cauldron says:
Hi! First of all, I really like your story, the idea is new and I like the characters. And I also like the fact that you are going to write a long story, even if that means that I have to wait longer till Draco and Hermione discover their feelings and start dating etc.
But I think the beginning of the story isn't soo well done: I mean, Hermione has just lost her child and everybody goes back to normal routine, doesn't she suffer more from her loss? And what is with Ron? He broke up with her and now they are living together in the Burrow and don't talk (don't fight) to each other? But the more the story continues the better it gets so I'm really excited for a new chapter.

Author's Response: I agree with you with the beginning of the story...it was not done so well, with Hermione's child being forgotten. And about Hermione staying at the Burrow with Ron, them not having any fights, yes, I agree with that also. I should have made the beginning better, or maybe even different, and I'm sorry for that, but I hope you enjoy the next chapters. Thank you for the awesome review! And, yeah, I wanted to make this story long, and if Draco and Hermione get dating so quickly, then the story may not have turned out so good as it may be right now. I hope I haven't disappointed you with the other chapters. Thanks again, and the next chapter will be up soon. :)

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