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Review:water_lily43175 says:
I loved the beginning of this chapter. Absolutely loved it. I can't put into words exactly what it is that makes it so good, but it just IS. I'm sure you'll know what I mean.

Scorpius, caring about Rose by taking her food. NAW. But this actually says just as much about his general character as it does about his feelings for her, because he's been trying to feed Methuselah too. He's a good egg. Rose needs to see this. :)

So much hilarity at Scorp trying to be polite to Harley, and Harley totally rebutting him. Nice try, Scorp! And once again, it's all about Draco and generally being a Malfoy. Poor thing.

I GOT THE RIDDLE! *smugface*

Methuselah is utterly enchanting. I LOVE the way he talks! He has no social skills whatsoever but that's what makes him who he is. Love him.

And he has a point. It's intriguing, this whole "need a cure but need to find out what on earth we're curing" thing. HMM.

Redcaps? REDCAPS? Whadt? The proverbial faeces truly has hit the fan(ith). WANT MOAR.

Author's Response: Glad this beginning works; I rather hate writing this kind of "cover a big period of time and set up the new status quo" transition sequences, so I suppose that means I fuss over them. Glad to know it works, though I'm not sure why!

Scorpius is pretty eager to please right now. Despite his rather apathetic attitude he doesn't like not having anything to do, and this is a way he can help. But we can note he still kept on feeding Rose while he gave up on Methuselah. ;)

It is, indeed, ALL about Draco and generally being a Malfoy. As we shall see more of. And ha, Scorp is getting practice with the riddles. Glad Methuselah works. He's a real favourite of mine. Which, I suppose, makes them all favourites of mine, which is just as well. But he is a smart cookie despite his utter incompetence at working with others.

Hitteth the fan...eth... indeed. Redcaps. Dah dah DUM.

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