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Review:water_lily43175 says:
I'm looking for ways to procrastinate from doing my uni work/writing Rails right now. What better way than to finally catch up on my backlog?

Selena. Oh, Selena. I love this bit. Finally, we get to see a bit more of her. Doing her hair, making sure she looks good, totally shallow - except it's NOT, it's just her trying to hide her feelings like a good Slytherin. I LOVE it. And she would like Harley, wouldn't she? Amazing.

This exchange reminds me that we still don't know the full Scorpius/Miranda story. HMM.

"Do you think I get this excited about breakfast, Scorp?" BAHAHA. Love Scorp/Al.

Patronuses. PATRONUSES. Of COURSE! Fantastic method of communication, well done Hermione on developing it. I love Scorpius' amazement that she developed it 'just in case', and then her reaction of 'well of course I did, why wouldn't I?' Sums them both up in a few words.

"I have other names for him." DEAD. Rose awarding Scorp some credit. Interesting turn of events. She really was impressed by him!

"What did you find in the Forest?" "Darkness." Helpful, Scorp. It's a forest...

Intrigued by Hermione's conversation with Nat. VERY intrigued. Need to know these things.

Oh, Selena is my complete fave now. AMAZING. Casually spouting out a bit of magical theory like that. I love her.

Poor Scorp never gets his own job! In fairness to him, if he hadn't exploded the store cupboard, they'd all have gone down with this illness, so he actually did them a great favour! Be nice to him, Nat, he doesn't deserve this! NEXT CHAPTER.

Author's Response: Yay, I am a procrastination tool! Or a tool. Who knows.

Selena was getting a bit neglected before this scene, I thought, but it's a start of her hitting back. She's fun in it, and there's more to come. And SOMEONE had to manage to get on with Harley, and it wasn't going to be Scorpius by now. But yeees, she may know more than she's letting on about Scorp/Miranda. And there's more of THAT to come.

The idea of Hermione having become stupidly prepared for all sorts of eventualities post-war always amused me; certainly in Ignite she's got her finger in a gazillion pies just to try to stop the world from going to pot all over again. She's decided to have her own little arc in the story, which I wasn't anticipating (parents were meant to solely serve their children's arc), but I'm okay for a Hermione rebellion.

Rose likes seeing the worst in Scorpius and making sure everyone else can - but by her nature she has a harder time ignoring evidence right in front of her nose. She IS her mother's daughter after all.

Haha, Scorpius makes that exact argument to Nat in a later chapter. More coming! No worries! Thanks for reviewing!


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