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Review:caoty says:
Hey, it's me, from tag this time.

So I'm a little bit sceptical of Regulus/OC stories usually, but then again, it's you who's writing it, so I've got no idea what to make of that concept. I'll just have to wait and see if you do continue with this, I suppose.

I like your Regulus. He's a conflicted but essentially decent guy, and he's relatable. Voldemort is also well-characterised, Sirius' note is pretty much in character for a person like him, and Kreacher's very Kreachery.

You may want to rethink some of your language, though, 'cause you've got phrases like:
>cold calculated amusement
I know what you're trying to get at - laughing at Reg's expense - but you can't have calculated amusement. I don't think even Tommy boy plans to be amused at things. XD

You've still got a few missing apostrophes and a lack of capitalising Wizarding nouns and verbs, so you or your beta may want to take another look at that.

Author's Response: Don't worry, I'm not sure what to make of this concept either. =P

Good to know that my characters are up to par, some people seem to like Kreacher and some don't. It's interesting how people see him very differently.

I really need to reread and fix this, but I'm guessing it has wait to until December. My NaNo OF and Oliver/Charlie fic seem to be rather time-consuming at this point.

Thanks for the review! =)

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