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Review:Leigh Kelley says:
Hello (:.

This was a really good start to your story. I could really feel what Clara was, and I almost wanted to cry myself. I don't think people realise just how hurtful words can be. They get a good laugh out of it, but for the person living with being bullied for a long time, it's not easy.

I think this story hit me especially hard after everything that has been happening as of late. I've read too many news articles about teens, bullying, and the end result of it. I truly hope that Clara becomes one of the few that stands up to her tormentors. As difficult as it may be.

I like that you have James apologise to her. And I do like the thought of them being friends. Maybe with him by her side, things will improve a little. But who knows? Sometimes something like that can make the bullying increase.

Ehe. I rambled. But this was a really good start and I'll be reading on.

~Leigh

Author's Response: Hello! :D

I'm glad you like it! Aww, I'm sorry I didn't want to make anyone cry! D: It isn't easy being bullied, more people need to know that!

Many things have been happening about bullying lately and it always will, which is so awful. I just wanted this fic out to show that people are affected by it. And, Clara will stand up to her tormentors, it's just later in the fic. ;)

It won't increase, I promise you! It gets better, but I'm sure you saw that in the other chapters. :p

Don't worry about rambling, I do it all the time! ;)

Thanks for the review! I'll go answer your other ones now! :D


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