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Review:CassiePotter says:
PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON! I need it, especially after that ending!!! It was incredible! The whole chapter was amazing, and I think this one in particular captured both Audrey and Percy's personalities, and their dynamic and chemistry. They're a really good pair, and I think he needs her to lighten him up a bit, and she needs him because he can look after her but still knows that she can hold her own. Really this whole story is just brilliant. The banter and emotion is fabulous, and I can't wait to see what happens next! And when she finds out he's a wizard! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hello!

Argh, I'll have to write the next chapter then! I'm always really surprised when people even read this story because I didn't think that the plot would really catch on well. But its actually far more popular than Abandon to be honest and it only has a few chapters! Hahah. Not sure what it is but thanks so much! *Blushes*
I was worried that I hadn't captured Audrey OR Percy's personalities very well in this chapter. I sort of thought that I should have added a bit more but decided against it, the chapter flowed better than I would have thought towards the end! Phew!
Oh, yes, Percy needs Audrey to lighten him up and tease him a little and she really needs him to be there for her. Neither of them have said this but its more than obvious from the way they interact with one another.
Audrey's incredibly stubborn and Percy is just...Percy. There's no other word for it right now and he's really not the type to admit defeat or even acknowledge what he really wants. And we all know what they want right now, don't we? :3 Mwhahahah.
I'm going to try and get the next chapter typed, edited and into the queue soon. I have some work to do because its actually a pretty juicy chapter and Audrey may or may not discover what Percy is. Hehehehe. >:D
I think I'm going to finish up A Force of Wills for you and I hope you love that too! Sigh. The things I'm doing to these characters should be illegal. Hahah. Anyhoo, thanks for coming back! :D
Much love of course,

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