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Review:water_lily43175 says:
Nawww, poor Dominique missing out on the Veela genes! Those Weasley genes, they're persistent, eh?

I love Derek wishing he had half-term. I wish I did, too! I did my usual trick this week of forgetting that it was half-term, and popping into town - it was heaving. HEAVING. Bad move. Try again next week! But yes, Hogwarts should have a half-term, and I hadn't actually noticed before that they don't! I mean, how do Muggle kids explain that one to their friends? I swear even boarding schools have half-term...

Hmm. Scorpius ISN'T eye-rolling. Yup, he's definitely not a stereotypical Slytherin! He is GOOD.

Abric Fletcher knows how to steal. Haha, definitely Dung's kid!

UH OH. As the title tells us, it's the writing on the wall! This isn't going to end well.

Author's Response: *grins* Well, they are only an eighth Veela at that stage, so I'm guessing the excessive beauty would be diluted. Plus, I didn't want to make Dominique a brilliant Quidditch player and an astonishing beauty. *laughs*

Writing Derek's comments, I only just noticed how short a term "half-term" is, compared with "the mid-term break". Your phrase is definitely neater on this one.

And yeah, that part about Scorpius was meant to give an indication of what kind of person he might be. You're observant. You're picking up on more than I'd expected most people to, but then I know you're observant from your comments on the Harry Potter books.

And yeah, Abric is Dung's kid. Now, why did I give him a first name I can never remember how to spell? Well, I know why. It was the meaning, which fit pretty well with Mundungus.

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