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Review:water_lily43175 says:
I LOVE your James. Absolutely love him. He comes across as so self-confident, but you can tell that underneath he really is worried about not making the Quidditch team.

Nice little assessment of Albus' classes. It all flows, which is nice. Sometimes people throw it in and it just feels awkward. And I love Flitwick. Who doesn't?

I always find it funny when students who can barely fly seem to think they can try out to be on the team. Bless them. And James as a KEEPER. Nice. Different. I like. Another instance where I'll have to drum it into my head that RAILS IS NOT CANON. And I was genuinely worried for a moment that he wouldn't make the team. But he did, yay!

Hmm, secret Slughorn/Blackburn rendezvous, eh? Haha. Peculiar behaviour from her. Detention? REALLY? She's one to watch. HMM.

Author's Response: I did a LOT of editing to make that stuff flow. *laughs* I'm glad you think I've succeeded.

I'm also glad that you thought he mightn't make the team. *grins* I wanted to keep a bit of suspense up. I was actually considering putting a poll up on the Nuthouse as to what position James should play. I was kind of tempted to make him a Beater, so if Albus played for Ravenclaw later on, he'd have to fire Bludgers at him, but I decided not to be so evil.

And *laughs* SL got suspicious of Blackburn at this point too. I will say Blackburn is one of the characters I'm most enjoying writing in this. And I loved writing that part about the detention. It was so random. "You passed down the corridor! Detention!" *laughs*


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