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Review:water_lily43175 says:
Oh, Albus, forgetting which house he's in. The silly billy! Easily done, though, if Gryffindor's all he's known thus far!

My brain is so full of Rails stuff now that it completely throws me when other people age the Next Gen characters differently! Your James is two school years above Al, whereas mine is only one school year above. It's not even relevant to Rails because it's post-Hogwarts, but I know all the relative school years anyway therefore it's completely confusing me right now *giggles*

Oh, don't tell me the dirty Slytherin Fletcher boy is Mundungus' son! Don't tell me some poor woman had his child...

I am, naturally, loving all this Statute talk. Haha, Derek. "What if somebody finds out? Somebody who isn't meant to know?" WELL, Derek, they're supposed to get the Obliviators involved, but occasionally you get a moron who thinks he can manage the situation himself. And it never ends well!

"Only Aunt Hermione would give directions to the library." DEAD.

Possibly THE overriding theme of this chapter is basically just how much Muggleborns are in the dark over the wizarding world. I mean, Muggle persecution has surely always been a crucial thing for anyone to know about, but at the point we're at now, it's unbelievable to think that Muggleborns turn up at Hogwarts with absolutely no clue about their new world's history! They should really give them a basic background of wizarding history when they first turn up. Or maybe that would just scare them off *giggles*

Good chapter! :)

Author's Response: I was thinking the ages were going to get confusing for you. Actually, shortly after I started writing this, I was editing your story and you mentioned Roxanne and I was like "but shouldn't she be only about starting Hogwarts now", then I realised your Roxanne is a whole lot older. The James thing didn't throw me so much, because a year doesn't matter much when they are grown up.

And you figured that out about Abric! I wasn't sure if anybody would, since he's a fairly minor character. I've added a few extra hints later on.

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