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Review:StormThief17 says:
First review!

Ok first off, nice job with including Elaine! I think you really strengthened her character in this chapter. With only really 5 characters, you have so much room to develop and focus on them and I think that's awesome! Once again, you proved how totally crazy and bipolar Salazar is. He's such a mysterious character and I can't wait to see how he reacts to the news about Godric and Helga. On that note, I can't believe you're making us wait another chapter for her to reveal it! I was all geared up to hear her tell it, then *bam* she had to go and not say anything. *sigh* But seriously you did an awesome job of cliff hanging there! This chapter was really interesting I think in exploring the concept of the sorting hat, and also the women founders on wishing for motherhood.

One thing, I was really surprised to see how young they are. Maybe just because I haven't read the first chapter in a while, but I didn't realize they were so young. Maybe you could find some way of putting that in earlier? If it is in earlier and I just forgot, feel free to ignore me on this!

Awesome chapter, can't wait to see more!

-Kathryn

Author's Response: Yay, first review on chapter 6! Thanks so much for coming, Kathryn :)

I'm so glad you like Elaine in this! Your comment about not seeing enough of her is what inspired me to write that "girl talk" scene. I had great fun putting the women together and seeing where their conversation might go. And it was fun to explore the experience a medieval woman might have living at Hogwarts.

Hahaha, bipolar Salazar. I think that's a funny way of putting it :) And I know, the wait is kind of cruel, isn't it? Unfortunately, Helga tends to chicken out under pressure, so it might be a little longer. But there will be a big reveal in ch. 7, just maybe not the one you're expecting.

I briefly mentioned their ages in the very first chapter, but I see what you mean about forgetting. The more reviews I get, the more I realize I need to go back and edit later. I'll try to stick that info in sometime between the beginning and now :)

Thanks girl! This review made my day!

--Maggie


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