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Review:Margravine says:
Oh my word. I keep meaning to sit down and give each chapter the in depth review that it deserves but I haven't had time.

This killed me, even though it does feel very in character - the two of them have gone through so much, but still have so many issues. They came so close and I had such hopes for them after the last few delightful doses of intimacy after so, so long, and I don't know how both of them can do the growing up they still obviously need to do.

Gabe and jen's relationship is a surprise show stealer, and I am enjoying the thought of his face in the morning.

I do really want to know so much more about nat, especially since I'm fairly disturbed by what she's become in "ignite", but I've really enjoyed seeing tanith interact realistically with Harry and Ron. Update schedule has been absolutely brilliant as well, as have chapter images (always been in love with the guy from alias)

Anyway I thought it was past time I reassured you that you are still the force keeping me in fan fic long after I've stopped writing!

Author's Response: Not that I'd say *no* to an in-depth review for each chapter, but I'll take the reviews I can get! I'm just happy to know there are people out there enjoying what I've written.

It's a horrid chapter in its way, dealing with that immediate emotional fallout, but you're right: there are still hurdles between the two of them which need overcoming, and right now they've not made the progress necessary to get there. It would take some serious movement for them to get there to any sincere degree.

Gabe and Jen really do steal the show, don't they? I say this as a surprised writer. They always wrote themselves but they REALLY write themselves in this. I do love 'em. They're like the counter-point to all of T/T's silliness.

We shall see more of Nat, have no fear. Her story is not done yet, and there will be more explanations and development forthcoming. Update schedule has enjoyed the luxury of... with Shadow's release schedule, I actually FINISHED this story before I ever started posting it, so it's coming out as regularly as is reasonable, which makes life easier. Ta on the chapter pics, they came out better than I hoped (and I, too, like my casting).

Thanks for the review! And the reassurance, so long as there's people out there reading, I will continue to scribble away!


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