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Review:Akussa says:
I really love how this story is developping and, I really like Amelia as a main character. Her personality and ego are great and really enjoyable. The way you describe everything and how she sees the Slytherins and herself is original and really fun to read.
Oh and Oliver's comment about the Ravenclaws being pretentious twats was just hilarious. I'm working on a story around Ravenclaws at the moment and this sentence described my story perfectly!!

I really liked the conversation with Umbridge; she is a sneaky little toad and you really capture her personality perfectly.

I noticed one little thing and, really, it's just so I can give you some constructive criticism at some point because this story really doesn't need much work at all. During Oliver and Amelia's conversation, you forgot to put a space between two pieces of dialogues which breaks the rythm of your writing. Yep, that's it. Nothing more, nothing worst!

It was a great chapter, keep it up!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so sorry it took me so long to reply - I kept meaning to, honest.

As always, I'm glad you're enjoying reading Amelia as much as I'm enjoying writing her. I love slipping in those little references to the houses and the way they operate, and it's good to know I'm not the only one with those ideas.

I hadn't noticed that, and I will definitely go back and fix it when I have time. As always, thank you for the review and for reading!

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