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Review:CassiePotter says:
Gabbie this was phenomenal. Absolutely incredible and I loved it! You have me intrigued with Ben and his father! Who, by the way, I was super excited to see! I didn't know we'd get a bit of Draco in this chapter! But it made really happy! :) and I loved the end of the chapter! We get to delve a little deeper into Roxanne's feelings for Benjamin, even if she's not quite sure what those feelings are yet. I'm curious to see what happens between them, because he doesn't seem like the dating type, but I could also see them ending up together... I guess I'll just have to wait and see! Awesome job with this chapter! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hello!

Cassie, its nice to see you again! Thanks for liking this chapter! I worked a bit harder on it than I thought I did. For some reason, I wasn't quite sure where I was going but in the end, I thought, "Hm. This is where I need to go because...honestly, its Benjamin and Roxanne. This isn't fluff!" Hahaha.
Yep, Draco had an appearance in this chapter. He actually become pretty important later on down the road if things go in the direction I'd like them to. The Draco in this story is the grown up version of the monster we all know and love from A Force of Wills. What happens in that story plays a very important part in this one. Draco isn't the same after what happens to him in that one. Heheheh.
Anyhoo! Roxanne's feelings for Benjamin are a little complicated because she's not really sure what she's feeling. Is it a school girl crush? Something deeper? Scarier? Those are the questions that I'll play around with later on.
Benjamin isn't the dating type. I'll just put that out there. He's more like...I dunno, a thing that just likes to get what he wants. Hahhaa.
Anyhoo, the next chapter is finished, I just have to do some editing and put it in the queue! Thanks for coming back!
Much love,

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