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Review:Leslie says:
Oh goodness Draco, what do you need to think
about?! JUST ANSWER HER! (I do know why he has
to think about it though, he wants to protect her and
everything... But I just want him to answer her
anyway!)
And really Draco, how did you not understand the
unicorn thing sooner?! I got it right away - genius! I
was wondering how she was going to talk in code,
and how he would kno it was from her.

And that part about why it was his grandmother's
house - perfect!! It fit right in and made perfect
sense. :D good job! I loved the whole part with his
grandmother, seeing the type of family he came
from. It puts Narcissa in perspective too, and makes
her seem less crazy for all of her pureblood
nonsense.

Author's Response: I know, but what if the owl got intercepted or something?!?! He has to think of these possibilities!

Yah, the Unicorn thing was a little lame, but that was about as good an alias as I could have come up with at the time. But if I got a letter with that author, I'd prolly have to think about it for a second, too...

I'm glad you feel that back story of the house was good, I was worried it might seem a little too forced. As soon as I caught that mistake the last chapter I was like, "Gah! I need to think of something quick!" So I'm happy that it came off naturally.

I can't WAIT to here your reaction to the next chapter. Should be interesting...


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