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Review:sour_grapes_snape says:
I thought you did a good job providing a decent back story for Lily in just two chapters. I liked that you gave Lily depth by describing her struggles with love in her life and it gave more reason for her to hold back in loving James.

At times, it could seem a bit choppy - it didn't quite flow right. I'd suggest maybe trying to add in a bit more detail and imagery. Other than that, very good job :)

Also, sorry it took a while for me to get around to reviewing. Thank you for entering my contest!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you liked it! I'll probably go in and edit when my beta decides I'm good enough to take up some of her time :( The critiques are always welcome and I really appreciate you giving them.

And I totally understand that it took you a little bit to get around to this, everyone does something other than fanfic!

Thanks again :D

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