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Review:Jchrissy says:
So many Fred feels! So many!!

I loved the way you brought us inside George's head. It wasn't too much.. I think there's a point where this kind of pain can sound unnatural, but this felt perfect.

The imagery.. George feels literally lifeless. Worse than that. Him thoughts about wanting Fred's body all to himself were absolutely amazing. Because Fred is his. I mean, he's part of the whole family, but he's really George's. Those two are closer than anyone could imagine, and you brought that all to the surface with this.

The section about Lee was so creative and highlighted George's desperate need to just never have wanted it to happen. As sad as it was, I love it.

Awesome start!

Jami

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story :)

I'm trying to portray George's grief as best as I can, and to go into detail about the twins' sibling relationship with each other. Your feedback has been really helpful so thanks once again :)


-teh


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