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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
Back for chapter 2!

The interactions between the Marauders was very well done, managing to represent both a normal realistic group of teens as well as what we know about their personalities from the books. Beth seemed to fit seemlessly into it as well, and she seems like a character many readers would relate to . Snape's entering vibe was well executed, and it will be interesting to see what kind of tension Beth's feelings may cause with her friends.

So much more to read!

-James

Author's Response: I'm so happy you came back for the second chapter! And I'm pleased you liked the interactions between the Marauders, too. I've really loved writing their friendship in this story, arguably more than the romantic aspect between Beth and Snape! Realism is something I always, always strive for in writing, so hearing that it was realistic to you is very much appreciated. :)

I didn't set out to write this story knowing that adding in a fifth Marauder (especially a female one) was cliche, and I'm very happy that she fits in well with the others.

Thank you so much, once again, for giving this a shot! I honestly can't tell you what it means to me. Here's hoping to see you back very soon, and I really do appreciate what you're doing for me!


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