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Review:Gaius Scipio says:
I like the fact that you're telling this in a 1st person narrative and that you're trying to show Hermoine's sense of wonder at being a witch. But I feel like you've made Hermoine know more than she probably would have about magic and Hogwarts. I'm sure that at age 11 she probably may have guessed that there were strange things going on but my feeling is she may not have assumed (despite how clever she is) rgiht of the bat that she was witch. But then gain maybe she would.

Still congratulations on the 1st chapter of your first story. I will keep an eye out to see what happens to Hermoine at Hogwarts. Best of luck

Author's Response: Thankyou, I appreciate your feedback. But she didn't know she was a Witch she just thought she was different to others but she never dreamed she was a witch. Anyway, thanks for reading.

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