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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
My first thought after reading this chapter was poor Penny. I'm still in a state of denial regarding the fact that Sirius never showed up. How could you do this?

Plot- I loved the plot. This chapter certainly adds an unforeseen twist to the plot. I was at least expecting Sirius to show up!

Grammar- Again, I didn't notice any mistakes.

Characterization- I'm a little confused about Sirius' characterization. From the previous chapters, I received the impression that he had feelings for Penny. However, this chapter seemed a bit contradictory, implying that Sirius could care less about Penny. I was also a little confused with Remus' appearance, as well. It seemed a bit unnecessary, and, if anything, merely filler. Additionally, why did Penny have a complete mental break down in the common room? I thought that was a little strange.

Description- There wasn't a great deal of description in this chapter, but I enjoyed the small amount that was present. I don't think any more description is needed to convey the overall message of the chapter.

Dialogue- The dialogue was a little choppy and strained when Remus and Penny were talking. It was just an awkward exchange with no real purpose.

Overall, this was my least favorite chapter so far. Still, I can't wait to read the next chapter!


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