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Review:alicia and anne says:
Sorry it took me a while hun but I am here! :-D
I am loving McGonagall marking the essays and thinking about how Phoebe is getting Gideon's natural ability! Haha oh my Charlie and Tonks copied her work, I love it!
I really want McGonagall to tell Phoebe about her mother rather then her accidently finding out from another source,
I think Severus just hates students :-D hehe.
I am loving the bickering between Severus and McGonagall hehe you've written them so well together.
I really hope that Phoebe doesn't have to wait six years that's an awfully long time.
Another wonderful chapter my lovely, I can't wait to read more! :D

Author's Response: I had to have Charlie and Tonks copy her it seems like something Phoebe would do. In her mind she doesn't understand the concept of friendship that much. She thinks that they'll leave her if she doesn't help but they wouldn't dream of it.

I loved writing their little argument and I felt like McGonagall had the upper hand because she'd seen Snape grow up too so she could predict what he would say to some extent and she was treating him a little like a child.

A part of me wishes McGonagall would tell her but she's known Albus longer and he's done so much for him that she's too loyal, unless there was a simple slip of the tongue of course.

Thank you again!
-Bex

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