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Review:BKL8008 says:
OH and the plot just gets thicker! I love it that Charlie and Connor were in the wrong place at the wrong time, and didn't get Obliviated.
And the note? Just the thing that Rita would do. I do so hope Miranda gets hers, though. This just was NOT enough! ;)
Also liked that you've brought Scorpius into the group. He was surely beginning to feel left out, I think?
Still can't make the connection with a Muggles finding Diagon Alley and the bombing, though. Perhaps it's a location that doesn't click for me? Still not trusting Dan's parents, though...

Author's Response: Wrong place, wrong time... what's the opposite of serendipity?

I've never seen Scorpius as much of an extrovert; he needs something out of the ordinary to break the ice. I think you've made as many connections as there are to be made so far...


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