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Review:LoopyLemon says:
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This is wonderful!! It's really well written and a nice change from the typical Halloween fics.

I really liked your characterisation of Sirius. I loved how extreme his emotions were. From hating Peter to caring extremely deeply for Harry. It was really well done.

If I had one suggestion to make, it would be to watch your sentence length. The first sentence in particular was too long and became hard to follow.

Other than that however, this story was really really well done. I enjoyed reading it :D

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review!

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Originally I was trying to write a Marauders era fic, but Sirius decided that he wouldn't co-operate if I didn't write him bit differently. So this was a result. =)

Thanks for noticing it, I'll keep it in mind in the future.


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