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Review:orangezauber says:
Such an intense story and as much as it pains me to admit that a story that ends in death could be good, I actually found this story to be rather fantastic.

Your twists and turns really kept me on the edge of my seat. And even though I was hoping Remus and Marta would be able to stay together, I think I knew in the back of my mind the cycle had to continue. I especially like how you had Benjamin begin to call Marta, fourty-six. Unfortunately, it is a dehumanizing technique that often works in making people feel inferrior. It still sends shivers up my spine when thinking about all of the power Benjamin had throughout the entire story (and in the 45 previous girls). The again, Gaunt was the same surname as Voldemort's mother so it would only be fitting Benjamin would be just as powerful if not more.

Overall, this was beautifully written. Once I realized you had finished the story my self control was destroyed. I had to find out what happened. Thank you for taking the time to write this story. It truely has been an outstanding jouney. You are an amazing writer and as I have said mulitple times before the flow of your writing was breathtaking. Thank you again for all of your hard work.


Author's Response: When I originally concocted this story, I had a different ending. But when I got into it and learned more about Marta and Benjamin, I realized that ending wouldn't work as well as the one you see before you. Marta was never capable of beating Benjamin. Hence this epilogue.

Benjamin Gaunt is probably one of the strongest characters I have ever created (in both my fanfic stories and original works). I rather enjoyed writing him, simply because I knew his true nature and potential from the beginning. And unfortunately, I have a bad habit of creating a Remus/OC relationship that will inevitably end up being doomed in the end (why oh why must I believe in Remus/Tonks?).

I appreciate and thank you for all the kind words you have sent me now and in all past reviews! I'm glad you enjoyed it, despite the gloomy ending. I always looked forward to your reviews and I wish you the best with your own writing endeavors!

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