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Review:hushpuppy says:
Man, Stella gives absolutely awful advice! Albus tells Stella that he is in love with Ray. Stella knows that Ray doesn't believe Albus and thinks he is just looking for a hook-up. So Stella tells Albus to immediately go and ask Cecily, a "serial dater", for a date. If Al dates anyone right away it will confirm, to Ray, that he wasn't serious about Ray and wasn't looking for a relationship but a hook-up. I would blame Stella for the impending disaster but Albus is pretty stupid to take Stella's advice to heart...

You do such a great job of writing Stella in such a way that we empathize with her even when we recognize that her assumptions and actions are wrong. This is especially true in this chapter because while I'm happy she actually confronted James and stood up for herself, she wasn't very fair to James because she had already convinced herself of his guilt. The tension is going to make for great conflict in the upcoming chapters so I'm happy as a reader ;-)

Thanks for the new chapter, I hope you have less trouble with the next one.

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