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Review:CassiePotter says:
Roxanne went with Benjamin! Oh I can't wait to find out what happens, and how she gets back! I wonder if she'll get caught... I really love how she calls him Ben. It makes them seem much closer, and gives more depth to their relationship. I think is version of the story definitely has a lot more character development earlier on, and I'm really loving it so far. But I'm interested to see how far both Benjamin and Roxanne are willing to go for each other. Because their relationship isn't as gushy or romantic as some, I can't tell if he really has feelings for her, or if she'll let herself have feelings for him. Is was a fabulous chapter, and I really loved it! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hello again!

Yay, you came back! Yes, Roxanne went with Benjamin. How naughty is she?! Its something that I wanted to put out there for her character, which made it alot different from the other version.
Their relationship itself is different as well and they are closer than they act because, let's be honest, Benjamin wouldn't have gone out of his way for just anyone. And Roxanne calling him Ben while he still calls her Weasley is just something I wanted to play around with. Its almost romantic but not quite to the point where they'll be promising each other the stars. Knowing Ben, he'd just steal something for Roxanne if he could get the chance. :D
I didn't like the fact that I hadn't had enough character development in the other version and I'm glad that you liked what I'd done here. I tried to make them seem a bit more real, which is why Roxanne's character in particular is alot different. She couldn't hold up against Angelina and Astoria, my other two gals and I thought she was a tad weak in that regard. :p
Well, uhm, they're willing to go a little farther for one another. Perhaps not in the way you'll like, depending on if the fifth chapter goes as well as I'd like. >:D
Nah, Ben and Roxanne aren't really the gushy type. That's not his style and Roxanne herself might be a spoiled princess but she's also a hard Quidditch fan and would find Ben quoting poetry a bit...odd. Hahahah.
Not like he would quote poetry, mind you. Ben is sort of too impatient for that. He's got better things to do! Hahahaha.
You're not supposed to be able to tell if Benjamin has feelings for Roxanne or not! HAHAH. I did that intentionally cause I'm so evil like that. >:D
Thanks for coming back, as always darling!
Ah! Albus Potter etc, etc has another chapter and Ms. Tang and her Weasley are back so check that out! And I think the fourth chapter for this should be up in a few. So, plenty to read!
Now update for your stories! I need my fix! :D
Much love,
Gabbie


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