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Review:nathan says:
Continuing our previous conversation, I acknowledge your points and here is my counter-argument for each point.

I know that dumbledore theory of love is important but that only worked against voldemort because he never understood or felt love-who says grindlewald didn't?

Being able to fight off 100s of dementors may mean that harry is quite powerfull however that does not help when you're fighting against an experienced dueller who is faster than you (like grindlewald).

As you said he got knocked about by snape in the astronomy tower. Snape was very powerfull but dumbeldore was more powerfull and grindlewald was as powerfull as dumbledore so grindlewald should have been able to 'knock about' harry just like snape.

If you notice-harry rarely comes into contact with death eaters in book 7 and when he does he is either assisted by ron and hermione, or he escapes (apparates) or he is captured (malfoy manor). He didn't fight his way out of malfoy manor rather escaped with HELP of dobby.

When harry is doing his OWL's the examiner says he tested dumbledore as a teenager and dumbledore 'did things with a wand I never knew were even possible'. Harry never created any spells as a teenager. So grindlewald who was as powerful as dumbledore probably could-therefore he was more powerful.

Just want to end of with saying that I actually loved the rest of the story and appreciate all the time you must of put into it. I'm not trying to be ungratefull just want to express my difficulties with that chapter.
Sorry again if I'm upsetting you in any way.
Thanks a lot and really really looking forward to your next story.
PS: Quick question: Is the next story a continuation or about the marauders (I'll be happy with either).
Many thanks again

Author's Response: I think we should agree to disagree, mainly because I'm very tired and don't have the energy to reply to each of your points.
I'm glad you enjoyed the story though, and criticism is always good, you learn ways to improve, so your comments didn't upset me :)
In answer to your question, I think they're gonna run side by side, I'll just update each one according to which ever is further along.


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